blooms tasks:reading

hello everyone. sorry for the lack of posts I was sick for 2 weeks. but i'm back with some reading work for you all. now for the regular i would LOVE some feedback on my work did you like it, do I have to fix something, anything. now with a further a do here is my work.

What am I?

1. I am talked about a lot in the story 
2. I am on the second page
3. I am small 
4. I am big for my size 
5. I have 8 legs 
6. I am an insect 

My dad gave me a job that was really hard 

I hurt my finger and got a little sad

My mum heard me shout and said am I ok?

I threw a tantrum and shout back 

I went for a shower the got a surprise 

A spider was fighting for its life

The I realised I need to be calm

So when I went back I was done in the swirl of the palm.

New ending:when I opened the curtain, I saw a big black poisonous spider I screamed in agony as it jumped over towards me biting my skin making me nauseous and dropping to the floor.  

Pancake story

Hello. this is a short pep talk but all I want is feedback on how funny this is:)
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Reading

hello everybody my name is Levi and welcome back to my blog. I know its been a while since I posted but i'll try to do it more often. This week I have done a summery on my reading and i'm not really that proud of it... as always I love getting feedback and here is my work.

spelling for this week

Hello everybody. Today I will be showing you all my spelling for the week. I have been working a lot but this is one week out of 30 or 31. Alright I am going to show you know but stay tuned for the last post...until term 4...

Whole-what where when why hole 

Candle-can and levitation cap cat 

Forest-forecast rest rent reputation orca 

Noise-no note nope see sea 

Still-illusion ill state stamp steak 

Witch-with itch it itchy wip  

whole-I have a whole pie and I will eat it all.

candle-I lit a candle and I am going to blow it out.

forest-I have traveled to a forest and am going to explore it.

noise-I made a lot of noise but I think no one heard 

still-I am still sick and might not go to school.

witch-Witch things would you like a sword and shield or a bow and arrow 

Whole-two halves put together

Candle-a white thing that make a place 

Forest-a big green place that has lots of trees

Noise-sound

Still-not moving

Witch-a female with magic and or sorcery/a word describing if you want one thing or another  

Whole-whole wh/o/l/e w h o l e whole whole

Candle-candle c/a/n/d/l/e c a n d l e candle candle

Forest-forest f/o/r/e/s/t f o r e s t forest forest 

Noise-noise n/oi/s/e n o i s e noise noise

Still-still s/t/i/ll s t i l l still still 

Witch-witch w/i/t/ch w i t c h witch witch

week 10 reading

hello everybody. Today I will be showing my vocabulary chart for the final week of the term. Also give me feedback on how you guys are doing and how you like my post and blog. Alright here is the work bye.

Word	I have never seen this before	I have seen this word before	Write the sentence the word is used	I think this word means…..	Expert definition….
Parasites			But head lice are parasites	I think this word means an insect that can be a real pain	A orgasmic creature
Thorax			Lice have six legs connected to a thorax	I think this means a body part in insect/parasite	The part of the body of the mammal
Saliva			Saliva is useful for a Louis	I think this means a bigger type of spit that dogs use a lot	Watery liquid
Tombs			They have even been found in tombs	I think this means an ancient temple or ruin	A large vault

I have also done the parts of Lice/Nits. It is really disgusting but still.

dogs at the beach

hi guys it's Levi here and today I will be showing my dogs at the beach writing. please can I have some feedback because it would be really appreciated. enough talking I'll just show you the writing.

lables of a cockroach

by Levi
hey everyone my name is Levi and today I will be showing 6 lables of a cockroach. sorry if my spelling is incorrect but that besides the point. hope you like it ill be going know but also check out the rest of the blog I want to get 3000 pg veiws so please lets make it happen. alright bye guys.

vocab chart

Hello everbody my name is levi and today i will be showing my vocabulary chart.

a vocabulary chart is also known as a word investigation chart. the vocabulary chart has four words on the side and you have to write in three boxes the first you have to write the sentence the word is in the second is when you say "i think this word means..." then say what you think it is the third is when you say what The word actually means

here is my vocab chart and as always

Word	I have never seen this before	I have seen this word before	Write the sentence the word is used	I think this word means…..	Expert definition….
Petroleum			There made from petroleum, which is a non-renewable resource.	I think this word means a material that is used in plastic	A liquid mixture of hydrocarbons
Banned			Taiwan banned not just plastic bags.	I think this word means when you get kicked from something your permanently kicked	officially or legally prohibit
Biodegradable			They can’t be burned safely because that causes posionis gasses and pollution they are also not biodegradable	I think this means when something can't be destroyed without releasing gasses that cause	capable of being decomposed
Contaminated			Plastic and bags are often contaminated by paper	I think this means when you are trapping something with another object	having been made impure by exposure to or addition of a poisonous or polluting substance

free writing

writing

hello everybody. today I will be showing my writing for this week. I mean like I ask this all the time so Feedback please. thank you bye.

reading

Hey everybody. This week we have been reading a book called Tims clean up. It is about messy boy that then tricks his friends to clean the house.

this is my anticipation guide  

We have also seen a text to self a text to self is when you read a story then something happens and it reminds you from when you did it. for example if the book said someone fell of there bike it may remind you if you fell off your bike.

This is my text to self.

scrrencastify

hi everyone. today we have been learning about screencastifys. i already know this so this wasn't that helpful. but this was to my blog buddy Seth so i guess it was good. feedback please thanks bye. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1f9uHLYGEGqLmRTSuCgng65P3LNcaaJQr/view

hi everyone. today i will be showing my reading. and as always can i have some feedback? goodbye and have a great day.

my persuasive writing.

hello everyone. today i will be showing my writing that i was doing from the past 2 weeks. this was pretty fun to do but like every post i would love some feedback. thanks have a good day.

math strats

hello friends. today we are doing math strategies. I had some help with my friend Seth so please can i have feedback thanks.

 

Word Investigation Chart.

hello everyone. from the past week our reading group has been working on a word investigation chart. it wasn't really hard to do but i would like some feedback. thanks bye. 

Word	I have never seen this before	I have seen this word before	I think this means….. Because…..	Expert definition….
Smuggled			I think this means someone bringing something to somewhere	Bringing something into a country secretly or illegally
mended			I think this means that someone is fixing something	Repairing something that is broken or damaged
esplanade			I think this means a type of deck	A wharf
dingy			I think this means a small boat	A small boat

My free writing.

Hello blog friends. Today we are putting up school work that we did. I'm going to put up my free writing work hope you like it.

I would like some feedback on my work and what i should change.

This is my goals for next term.

ending of spider-man story

thursday upload

hi this is the most quality work i have done this week. also plz comment on my work if you think its good or bad.

T2W9

Link of afghanistan facts

     

New Ending

Mum’s bag was stolen and hidden she looks outside and inside but can’t find it. Jade lies and says that she has nothing to do with the bag but she will keep hunting for it.

Happy 😇	Sad 😢	Interesting 😐
Each night after tea Mum told stories about Afghanistan.	The day before Mum was due to fly Jade watched her mother pack.	It looks a lot like Central Otago with the snow on the mountains and popular trees.\/.

my writing for the holidays

First on a hot thursday morning i got up from bed and tiredly walked to my phone. After i got my clothes on and i went on my phone to watch youtube then i got on my ps4.

Second my sister came to my house to say that i'm going to movies with my brother,sister, and my sisters boyfriend piri. While i was waiting i keeped on playing games. After that i got in the car and we speed off to pick up piri then we waited at their place for half an hour then we zoomed off  to hoyts cinema to watch avengers endgame.

Later on my brothers girlfriend came and watched the movie with us.

Finally we dropped off my brother at my place after the movie then i went to my sisters house because i was staying at their place. I was so happy because i was really excited and happy how it turned out it really was fun.

fortnite quiz on not fortnite

hello everyone today we were doing some things for writing and one of them was a quiz so i was doing a quiz by myself i hope you enjoy it bye.