blooms tasks:reading

hello everyone. sorry for the lack of posts I was sick for 2 weeks. but i'm back with some reading work for you all. now for the regular i would LOVE some feedback on my work did you like it, do I have to fix something, anything. now with a further a do here is my work.

What am I?

1. I am talked about a lot in the story 
2. I am on the second page
3. I am small 
4. I am big for my size 
5. I have 8 legs 
6. I am an insect 

My dad gave me a job that was really hard 

I hurt my finger and got a little sad

My mum heard me shout and said am I ok?

I threw a tantrum and shout back 

I went for a shower the got a surprise 

A spider was fighting for its life

The I realised I need to be calm

So when I went back I was done in the swirl of the palm.

New ending:when I opened the curtain, I saw a big black poisonous spider I screamed in agony as it jumped over towards me biting my skin making me nauseous and dropping to the floor.