no more cats

Ka

Dad,mum,a ginger stray cat and a boy  

Cc f

First dad wanted no more cat’s secondly dad got a cat box to put the cat in after that dad almost got the cat just then he got to know the cat a bit and finally he wanted to keep the cat

aa

What am i? 1.i am not a human 2.i have fur  3.i might have 9 lives  4.i have claws  5.i can go to the vet 6. I am a cat

aa

:-)dad kept the cat.:-( dad wanted to get rid of the cat. Other. It was warm

Nib

If dad wanted to catch the cat he could have hypno glasses

ea

I rate this text 8 out of 10 it was really good the text was not that bad too that's why i rate it 8 to 10.

bloom 2

Knowledge a

people:nanny ,nanny's brother and kaore and the Moremore

Comprehension c

First nanny and i were talking secondly nanny told me about the guardian after that i saw the Moremore just then the bag got full and finally we ate what we caught and looked at the beach

Application a

What am i? I am not an human 2 i live in the water 3 i am a guardian 4 i have a fin like a shark 5 i live in a bay with a lot of water 6 i am a Moremore

Analysing

:-) i went out to find some dinner

:-(i could not find the Moremore

Other it was really hot

New ideas b

If they could there could be a fish detector so the sphere could pick up fish and tp them to the bag

Evilution b

This could happen in real life but the Moremore does not exist but a metal sphere can exist

ka.

dylan,bubbles,dylan's dad,harry and laiton

Cc.

When i got turned blind i could not see at all but things started to get a lot easier i could play rugby and write because of a machine that can make me write and can say what i write and i had lot’s of friends

Aa.

What am i? 1. I'm not a animal 2. I cant see 3. There are only talking in my dreams 4. I need someone to guide me places 5.i can't wear glasses because my eyes are shut all the time 6. I'm a blind person

aa.

:-)he can play rugby blind

:-(he is blind

Other he goes to school with friends

Nia.if dylan was blind he should have detecting glasses and if he's going to hit something it would beep so he knows that there is something in the way

Eb. this can happen in real life because people can be blind and the truth is that people blind can play if they have people to       guide them

the long walk

When she was young, where did Nanny walk?when nanny was young she used to walk every where

2. How far did she have to walk to be able to get some seafood?she walked down infront of her place

3. Where did Nanny have to go when the bridge was built?when the bridge was built nanny had to walk to the other bay

4. Who is Moremore?moremore is kaitiaki the gadein of the bay

5. How many times did Nanny see Moremore?nanny only seen moremore once

6. What did they hide in the flax and why?nanny hide the kete in the flax because it was to hevy

7. Why did the pipi move again?the pipi moved again because the water went black and smelly

8. Where did Nanny go after this?nanny went to the river mouth after it

9. Where did they live?nanny lived in a house in a town and the town was on a hill

10. Did they ever find the pipi again? Nanny didn’t find it again because it lived somewhere it is to far to actually walk

summery term 4 week 1

Characters the street man,tau,tau’s brother,crystal,a punk guy and tau’s uncle. Problem. The punk guy was saying that he hate’s gospel singer?.solved.tau’s uncle talked to the punk guy and the rest just ignored him?.adjectives.timidly.shudders.wheezy.

Gospel.adverbs

the riley army return 2 and the new army levi and his army.Will come back and he did Riley came back to get revenge  Daniel killing him and riley bran some help he comes with the riley army riley and this army of him he going to the tower of bones and made a potion of invisibility and the raise the dead ability and speed but he did not have the god potion it is safe from the riley army and the power can make the chaotic world so he made three poisons invisibility,raise the dead and speed……. To be continued

The Riley's army return.

Once Upon a time a man name Riley went to daniel and the magic tom  to fight the Nolans and the nono king but  nono. had a dog the magic tom bring up the riley army so the riley army killed nono and killed the nolans so riley jumped off a hill and riley was killed by daniel so daniel was a evil man to riley army so riley army was ruined and running and running and running but daniel was fuster and mitchell m stoped the riley army  from running and daniel got riley them he got killed so the riley army all got was dead