Tuesday 15 August 2017
On a dark and spooky night i left the country on a plane to australia with my mum,dad,sisters and prisoner brother to see my other brother in australia so when i got there i parted with my brother because it was his birthday party!!!!!!! After the !!!birthday!!! We played games,watch t.v. and go to the beach!!! And at midnight we had a bomb-fire!!!! And soon we camped out for the night in the morning we had pizza for breakfast lizzana for lunch and fish and chips for tea after tea i zoomed to the airport to go on the plane back to new zealand and we celebrated by having a special day we went to timezone because we got free tickets from my cousin that works at timezone and had a great time.
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Wow Levi you have used some really cool "wow" words like spooky and zoomed. I could imagine getting on the plane feeling frightened and cold from what you wrote. When we looked at quality blog comments one of the top tips I like is about using only one exclamation mark. Did you need so many exclamation marks? What prize did you claim with your timezone tickets?
ReplyDeletei really love it a lot
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ReplyDeleteHi Levi - It is a fantastic story. I really like the way you have described the way you got to the airport.
ReplyDeleteI also think it is great the way you have used different font sizes. How did you party with your brother?
Hi levi i like the bats on the slide
ReplyDeletethanks Ronav love the way you commented to me and i like the bats on the slide to and hope you comment again
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