Hello blog friends. Today we are putting up school work that we did. I'm going to put up my free writing work hope you like it.
I would like some feedback on my work and what i should change.
Thursday, 4 July 2019
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hi levi my name is seth. i really like how it was funny because of those jokes. i also like the way you used rare skins from fortnite. you could have added witch gun dose more damage. also witch movie character was in fortnite?
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