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Friday, 23 November 2018

the a&p show, the best place ever.

hi i'm Levi and here is what i would like to show you so that you will like the a&p show like me.


Galloping through the Grinch coloured grass the cloudy looking goat was out to play so if you like goats go to the a&p show.
Over the top awesome things you can see is at the a&p show.
Aroma fills the air with non-stop delicious smells like chips at the a&p show.
The animals you can see are so cute like petting pink clouds at the a&p show.

Super fun circus things are at the one the only !!!A&P Show!!! So if you like the circus (witch i don't) the a&p show is for you.
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3 comments:

  1. dylan26 November 2018 at 14:05

    hi levi you did a wonderful job on your a m p show work.

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    1. Miss Thomason29 November 2018 at 10:29

      Nice to see you commenting Dylan. You have given a 'Glow' comment I wonder if you could add in a grow and connect comment.

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  2. Miss Thomason29 November 2018 at 10:32

    Well Done Levi. I like the use of descriptive language. Next time make sure you stay on the topic you chose which was Goats. Because your word you chose was Goats, your poem needs to be all about Goats a the A & P Show. I liked the delicious smells at the A & P Show.

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