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Thursday, 15 March 2018

term 1 week 7 reading writing

I said ‘’is this power real’’ than i destroyed the moon with the power ‘’wow i need a ruler to rule with me’’ i said than i found my friend seth and i gave him some of my power ‘’wow this is so good i need to destroy the world with my power’’ seth said than we destroyed the and awaken the mighty galactus than i woke up and found out it was a dream and i was late for school the end.

1 comment:

  1. hi Levi
    I love your story work
    maybe you could make it so we could read it better.

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