blooms tasks:reading

hello everyone. sorry for the lack of posts I was sick for 2 weeks. but i'm back with some reading work for you all. now for the regular i would LOVE some feedback on my work did you like it, do I have to fix something, anything. now with a further a do here is my work.

What am I?

1. I am talked about a lot in the story 
2. I am on the second page
3. I am small 
4. I am big for my size 
5. I have 8 legs 
6. I am an insect 

My dad gave me a job that was really hard 

I hurt my finger and got a little sad

My mum heard me shout and said am I ok?

I threw a tantrum and shout back 

I went for a shower the got a surprise 

A spider was fighting for its life

The I realised I need to be calm

So when I went back I was done in the swirl of the palm.

New ending:when I opened the curtain, I saw a big black poisonous spider I screamed in agony as it jumped over towards me biting my skin making me nauseous and dropping to the floor.  

Pancake story

Hello. this is a short pep talk but all I want is feedback on how funny this is:)
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Reading

hello everybody my name is Levi and welcome back to my blog. I know its been a while since I posted but i'll try to do it more often. This week I have done a summery on my reading and i'm not really that proud of it... as always I love getting feedback and here is my work.

spelling for this week

Hello everybody. Today I will be showing you all my spelling for the week. I have been working a lot but this is one week out of 30 or 31. Alright I am going to show you know but stay tuned for the last post...until term 4...

Whole-what where when why hole 

Candle-can and levitation cap cat 

Forest-forecast rest rent reputation orca 

Noise-no note nope see sea 

Still-illusion ill state stamp steak 

Witch-with itch it itchy wip  

whole-I have a whole pie and I will eat it all.

candle-I lit a candle and I am going to blow it out.

forest-I have traveled to a forest and am going to explore it.

noise-I made a lot of noise but I think no one heard 

still-I am still sick and might not go to school.

witch-Witch things would you like a sword and shield or a bow and arrow 

Whole-two halves put together

Candle-a white thing that make a place 

Forest-a big green place that has lots of trees

Noise-sound

Still-not moving

Witch-a female with magic and or sorcery/a word describing if you want one thing or another  

Whole-whole wh/o/l/e w h o l e whole whole

Candle-candle c/a/n/d/l/e c a n d l e candle candle

Forest-forest f/o/r/e/s/t f o r e s t forest forest 

Noise-noise n/oi/s/e n o i s e noise noise

Still-still s/t/i/ll s t i l l still still 

Witch-witch w/i/t/ch w i t c h witch witch

week 10 reading

hello everybody. Today I will be showing my vocabulary chart for the final week of the term. Also give me feedback on how you guys are doing and how you like my post and blog. Alright here is the work bye.

Word	I have never seen this before	I have seen this word before	Write the sentence the word is used	I think this word means…..	Expert definition….
Parasites			But head lice are parasites	I think this word means an insect that can be a real pain	A orgasmic creature
Thorax			Lice have six legs connected to a thorax	I think this means a body part in insect/parasite	The part of the body of the mammal
Saliva			Saliva is useful for a Louis	I think this means a bigger type of spit that dogs use a lot	Watery liquid
Tombs			They have even been found in tombs	I think this means an ancient temple or ruin	A large vault

I have also done the parts of Lice/Nits. It is really disgusting but still.

dogs at the beach

hi guys it's Levi here and today I will be showing my dogs at the beach writing. please can I have some feedback because it would be really appreciated. enough talking I'll just show you the writing.

lables of a cockroach

by Levi
hey everyone my name is Levi and today I will be showing 6 lables of a cockroach. sorry if my spelling is incorrect but that besides the point. hope you like it ill be going know but also check out the rest of the blog I want to get 3000 pg veiws so please lets make it happen. alright bye guys.